choose one idea

once upon a time there was a breaking news  3 kids and one mother and dad.They were living on one pacific island .The three kids were out side playing sophie age 4 emily age 3 and elizabeth age 2 the house they were living in it was made out of brook and wood made  for the roof .


while the three kids were playing outside  suddenly the waves came rushing towards them they knew something was coming.They all ran inside the house sophie said mum some pirates are coming mum and dad went  what a day its time to move out of our  beautifull island.What  are they going to do mum and dad said they got an idea they all shuffeld in quietly  mum  said when they come in we will be at the back of the house so when they come in we will go back to nz .



on the boat they felt safe  when the pirates  went out side they said where is our boat  we dont know  maybe  the family that was living here .aww no  what's that runnnnnn.Here comes mawi the terrifing  boy who saves the day.hey you welcome

chuck it in the right bin

our korero is chuck it in the right bin .
we have to chuck it in the bin so our world can be clean and tidy .made by gabriella and khalia

Narrative planning

once upon a time their was 2 ladies .Their  names  were  Miss Ballerina princess and miss flash Superhero .Miss ballerina  lives in a castle and miss super hero lives in space .

the two ladies  were walking  back to there homes. Suddenly they saw a spooky haunted house.They said should  they go inside they all agreed .

when they  got inside the house they heard a noise said come in .They  got scared and  they  started  running out side.Suddenly a car came and got them.

number of the week

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character descreption

the thief

the number of the week

the haunted house

on a spooky scary night there was a giant moon at the back of the hideous dirty wibey broken house. 

There was a dark skinny little branches covering the hole house like its shrouded in fog ,crows as dark as night.

The giant moon covered the tree and the tree went  went dark so you couldn't see  it was like there was nothing there just howling wolf.

The lights of the house were on. The wolf was barking oooooooooooooo suddenly 6 bats came flying towards the house.