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Friday 20 March 2020

camp writting


Wonder Writing 200320

Once upon a time on a drizzle windy day, it was 1877 and it was dark and there was a world called
Wonderland and there were two characters named Joseph and Tevita and they went down an island
and they saw darkness surrounded by some staff.  

When they got there they saw a giant skeleton head and bones. They might think that they could take
the bones but instead they might just leave the giant skeleton head and take the stick bones.

But suddenly they looked up and saw something and it said "Leave me where I am because I will come
back alive" and Joseph said "how are you going to come back alive?" and the spirit glory person said
it is magical to me but not to you because I am the magical person in the whole wide world and
Joseph said "we are going to take it because you can't come back alive" and the glory guy said to
her friend to come and her name was Miss Sio a teacher that came from nowhere but we found her
in a city called New Zealand found her at her house and I said "do you want to come with me?" and
be my friend and she said yes so that how I got Miss Sio. 


Joseph and Tevita took the bones and went traveling around the world and exploring around.
Maybe they were giving some bone to each dog to eat and have fun a new it for a toy. "Hey Joseph"
he asks "can we go back where we got the bones and get the giant head skeleton" and Joseph
said "fine we can go and get it." So then they walk all the way back and took the giant skeleton and
made it for a house for a dog and news the bone for dogs food. but then they were happy.

Wednesday 18 March 2020

when we go to camp

Dear Mrs Sio,

I want to ask some questions about camp before we go camping on Wednesday what are we
going to do maybe eat snacks or go to get pizza or KFC or mc Donalds chose 1 choice. or we can go
on a trip to the cook islands and see my family and then come back to New Zealand then go to
Whangarei on the bus so I can go and see my nana aunty and uncle. Or come back to Auckland and
sleep on the bus and bring some snacks maybe yes or no.


1.do we go swimming every day.
2.can we bring our device
3.do we sleep with girls or sleep with our friend 
4.if I don't wake up what will happen 
5.what do we have for dinner
6.what do we have for lunch 
7. Do we go out every day
8. Do we go to school when we wake up and the others that
9. when do we bring our bags.
10.when we wake up will we be allowed to go and play on the park
11. when we wake up do still go to school
12. Do we do at art after breakfast?

I hope we have I good time at camp. We will have lots of fun with camp and have fun with you maybe
we can go to your house to make slime but only room 9

From Angel.

Wonder Writing 180320

The day started like any other until the starving hungry shark came up and out of the water and
suddenly crashed and he ends up in the volcano.


Boom off the volcano Erupted and splashed all on the mountains and got on fire. 


Finally, the shark got out of the erupted volcano and his body was on lava he did not know what to do
but suddenly he looked down and saw the clear water so the shark jumped and dashed right down into
the water and then the shark said never ever going up there again.  Some people began to come in a
car and they were two kids and a mum and dad the driver was mum she looked away and didn't
look where she was driving and drove and suddenly they heard a boom and then heard Sha boom
and a car boom and then they looked forward and the cargo crashed into the rocks and that car was
brand new and that was the older sons car for work. 


They got out and then mum said crying my sons not going to let my drive ever again and just stay
home being board.


So they went down to the beach and brought their staff and then they lay the picnic mat onto
the sand and then took all the staff out of her bag and for the picnic. What they made was KFC and
macaroni and cheese. That's what mum cooked for lunch and it was delicious.  Before they finish
mum said that the kids can go for a swim into the water the kids' names were Ruby and David and the
mum and dad's names were Joseph and Sophie.

when the kids touched the water there hands where freeze and they Didn't want to go for a swim.

They packed all there staff and then walked back home and that was 45 hours to get there
because mum crashed the car into the rock and now the older son can't go to work or maybe
he can catch a bus to his work.

miss sio room 9


Wednesday 4 March 2020

on Friday picnic

On Friday we had a school picnic mr vogt came and brought some cardboard for the slide not long Mrs Sio said to get our bag and hat and line  up in 2 lines and room 10 .When room 10 went i said to my cousin qweenie should we go and play at pt england beach and she said yes .Now mrs Sio said to walk.  We all waked in to lines to the hall we sat were we all set in assemble and we waited for mr burt to talk about safety in the water .Mr burt said if its not your turn to swim just make sure that the water is up to your ankle  not your uncle your ankle.As mr burt ‘’shouted’’ team 4 i was ready to go so i ran and jumped in the water and i was nice and cool my friend that i played with was alamander and cherveylee we had a copertishan who ever get up last win and they said ok so we did i said on your marks get set go so we breath in and went down into the everlasting water when i came up cherveylee was just watching us but when i went under the water i holded cherylees hand and tried to push her down but she was strong and brave to try and pull my hands of her and she pushed my head.After that i came back up and floated on my back but i couldn't because all the other people was splashing and pushing and i didnt like it so i swam all the way to my old teacher mrs gaston .I hugged her and went down she didnt go down because she had a hat on her so i went to my friend alamander and she moning some were i couldnt find her but she was just behind me so i said should we go and play but she said no so i pushed he down into the water and when she came up she laugh she went and i said wait and she just carried on going so it was nearly time for the year 5 and 6 to finished i was nervous because i didnt wanted to go out because the water was nice and cool but it was time to go out so the teacher gathered in and brang us out when i went up to get change i saw my brother deumorei but as we call him at home moari boy i said to him where aunty and he said i now were she come i will show you were she is.i said hi aunty and she said i angel my aunty said do you want

Our Sunday School Picnic

On Saturday, me, my aunty and brother went to Tamaki PIPC Church because we had a church picnic. We were the first people to be there.  1 minute later some more people began to come.
There were 9 people that had arrived but the others are still on there a way to church.  

As I went outside I saw two buses just waiting for the other people to arrive.

  Just 1 minute finally they were all there.  The leader of our Sunday school class had a meeting about swimming. 

We were going to go to  Mission Bay beach but then the teachers decided that we will go to long bay beach. 

Once we walk outside we got all told to stop and sing a song after that my papa's friend said that he was going to count us on the bus.  

It has to be 30 people on 2 buses so that we can have space.  

As we went my aunty started to fall asleep so I said good morning. 

It took 45 minutes to get to Long Bay.

When I got there I whispered in her ear and she got a fright and all of us in the bus laugh and got off the bus and said to the bus driver thank you.

At Long Bay Beach we laid our mat on the grass and open our chair to get ready to relax but I didn't because I went with my church to play some sport like rugby, soccer, football, and skipping. 

We played for 44 minutes and then we got told to have a break.  

 I went to my aunty and I had a sandwich in my sandwich I had bread,  butter, and tomato after that delicious sandwich I had some Doritos.  After that our church went down to the because and I looked at the water and it had big waves it was hot but when I felt the water it was cold but I just dived in and I got cold but I got warm and warm then I did some front flip in the water and some handstand.