Narrative planning

once upon a time their was 2 ladies .Their  names  were  Miss Ballerina princess and miss flash Superhero .Miss ballerina  lives in a castle and miss super hero lives in space .

the two ladies  were walking  back to there homes. Suddenly they saw a spooky haunted house.They said should  they go inside they all agreed .

when they  got inside the house they heard a noise said come in .They  got scared and  they  started  running out side.Suddenly a car came and got them.