Narrative planning

once upon a time their was 2 ladies .Their  names  were  Miss Ballerina princess and miss flash Superhero .Miss ballerina  lives in a castle and miss super hero lives in space .

the two ladies  were walking  back to there homes. Suddenly they saw a spooky haunted house.They said should  they go inside they all agreed .

when they  got inside the house they heard a noise said come in .They  got scared and  they  started  running out side.Suddenly a car came and got them.

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character descreption

the thief

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the haunted house

on a spooky scary night there was a giant moon at the back of the hideous dirty wibey broken house. 

There was a dark skinny little branches covering the hole house like its shrouded in fog ,crows as dark as night.

The giant moon covered the tree and the tree went  went dark so you couldn't see  it was like there was nothing there just howling wolf.

The lights of the house were on. The wolf was barking oooooooooooooo suddenly 6 bats came flying towards the house.